完型填空 (補全短文) "三遍法":第一遍了解大意;第二遍作題;第三遍檢查確認 例題: Alex ___1___ in a factory in a big town. He liked ____2____ very much, and was very good at it. Whenever he was free, he went down to the small ___3___ behind the factory and tried to catch some fish, but there were very ___4____ there, because the water of the river was dirty.. then one summer he went to the seaside during his holidays and ___5__ at a small, cheap hotel. "I've never fished in the sea ____6___," he thought. "It will be rather different from fishing in our river." On the first day he ____7____ a lot of fish and was very ____8___. He gave them to he hotel, and they ____9___ them for all the persons at the hotel, and they enjoyed them very much. After that, he did this every day. But when he got his bill at the ____10____ of his holidays, he saw on it "For oil to fry fish (7days): 14 dollars." 答案:1. worked 2. fishing 3. river 4. few 5.stayed 6. before 7. caught 8.happy/pleased/glad 9. cooked 10. end 3.短文寫作 短文寫作評分標準 評分標準: 第一檔:(15分-13分)符合題目要求,整篇表達清楚,語法無誤,詞匯拼寫正確,卷面整潔。 第二檔:(12分-10分)符合題目要求,整篇表達清楚,語法有少量錯誤,少量拼寫錯誤,卷面欠整潔。 第三檔:(9分-6分)基本符合題目要求,漏掉若干關鍵詞,超出了題目限制,整篇表達基本清楚,語言有部分錯誤。 第四檔:(3分-5分) 只能寫出題目要求的一兩個要點;只有個別句子能看懂,語法、詞匯錯誤很多。 第五檔:(1分-2分)只寫出了符合題意的若干單詞。 寫作要求: 符合題意;邏輯通暢;語法單詞正確;卷面清潔。 寫作的難題--寫作的步驟 篇--段--句--詞 1."篇" 明確主題 2."段" 構建結構 運用"提綱" 提綱案例 《我最喜愛的老師》 篇 主題: 段 提綱: 1. 老師基本信息介紹 a. 年齡 b. 相貌 c. 所授科目 d. … 2.令我感動的小故事 (描寫與敘事相結合) a. 時間 b. 地點 c. 事情的經過 d. 關鍵詞 shy; encourage 3.我對老師的評價 關鍵詞:enjoy his class; like 3. "句" 填充內容 多用短句(簡單句),慎用長句(并列句/復合句/并列復合句) 文中參雜若干語法正確的長句能夠成為亮點并得到加分。 短句為主,輔之于長句。 句子的完整、時態、人稱、單復數、以及動詞的變形。 修辭 比喻 像… be like The house is like a tank. He is like a panda. as… as… I am as hungry as a wolf. The teacher is as busy as a bee. He is as strong as a horse. 夸張 I am the luckiest boy in the world to have such a nice teacher. 擬人 The sky is smiling with beautiful sunshine. 4."詞" 可分為 "一般詞匯" 和 "具體詞匯" 一般詞匯 He is a good man. good → 具體詞匯 honest; diligent; hardworking; kind; nice; warmhearted; brave; selfless. "一般描寫" 和 "具體描寫" 一般描寫 She is very beautiful. → 具體描寫 She is very beautiful. She has dark hair, big shining eyes, and pretty face.