Herecomesspring. Theworldcomestoitself. ItookmyluggageandhadanextemporaneoustravellastSunday. Firstly,Iwentcampinginamountainnearmyhometown.Airinthatmountainisfresherthanthatincitywhichsmellsalittledisgusting.HereIhadabiglunchwhichcontainedvariousfoodssuchasfish,chicken,muttonandsoon.Whenwewerehavinglunch,birdskeptcompanywithus.Theysangattractivesongswhichmadeusunbuttoned. Inmoderncitylife,wearealwaysworriedaboutourpersonalaffairs,andhardlyhavetimetorelaxourselves.So,Imadebestofthisenjoyabletimetoenjoymylife. Secondly,Iwenttofishingonaboatwithmyfatherinariverwheretreesstand.Flowersweresinging,birdsweresinging,evenfishweresinging.Springisamagicseason.Itcangivepeoplehopeandenergytostruggleforourgoals. Asawill-graduatedstudent,Ilearnedalotfromthistrip. AsIsaid,springisaseasonwhichisfullofpowerandmagic.Everythingischanging.Nothingisimpossible.Springstartslivesandputhopeinourmind.HardandboringthoughCollegeentranceexaminationis,Iwillencouragemyselftostruggletotheend,justascockroaches. Fighting!修改后：
The spring is coming; and the weather becomes warmer and warmer. LastSunday, I went outing with my parents. First,wewentcampinginamountainnearmyhometown.Airinthatmountainismuch fresherthanthatinthe city. Therewehadabiglunchwhichcontainedvariousfoodssuchasfish,chicken,muttonandsoon. Whenwe werehavinglunch,birdskeptflying aroundus. Theysang songswhichmadeus happier. At that moment, my father said, Inmoderncitylife,wearealwaysworriedaboutourpersonalaffairs,andhardlyhavetimetorelax ourselves.So,let’s makebestuse ofthisenjoyabletimetoenjoyourselves. Then,Iwentfishingonaboatwithmyfatherinariverwheretreesstand.Birdsweresinging,evenfisharesinging. Springisreally amagicseason.Itcangivepeoplehopeandenergytostrugglefortheir goals. Springstartslivesandputs hopeinourmind.Hardandboringthoughcollegeentranceexaminationis,Iwillencouragemyselftostruggletotheend. 高三:吳子鳴